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Loading Status...Rejected Star wars: The Death Star
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The theme is orginal, and i like the build. The course looks really varying. You could try to add some detail to the build though! For exapmle, you could add some slabs to the building. It could also look a little better if you add glass panes to the lazer. But overall, it looks good! I hope it will get accepted 
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Hello JR3025,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have some maps from Star Wars (BB-8, Lightsabers.)
The build is a bit plain; I recommend using different blocks other than wool for your build, to make it look more attractive. It is a decent representation of the original thing, so good job on that!
The parkour is too straightforward (literally,) especially in the beginning. I recommend adding different styles of jumps throughout your map to help give it some variety. You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these jumps! The length and difficulty of the jumps are good for the medium difficulty, so good job on that!
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have some maps from Star Wars (BB-8, Lightsabers.)
The build is a bit plain; I recommend using different blocks other than wool for your build, to make it look more attractive. It is a decent representation of the original thing, so good job on that!
The parkour is too straightforward (literally,) especially in the beginning. I recommend adding different styles of jumps throughout your map to help give it some variety. You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these jumps! The length and difficulty of the jumps are good for the medium difficulty, so good job on that!
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
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