Rejected Parkour map review!!! pls

[S7EZI]

Map name: Anubis
Map creator: S7EZI
map jumps: 84
map difficulty: hard-expert. your choice
plot ID: 126;96
no barriers.
no alone floating glasspanes.

map pics: Ignore the little stonepath in pic 2. I deletet it

 

[Acrellux]

Looks like some of the parkour is floating, which isn't accepted on ManaCube anymore. Try to put the parkour on the build

 

[Elly_x]

Hello S7EZI,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around temples. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is okay. The build is accurate for what you are going for but the floating parkour causes for a messy look. Next time you can also try adding block variance to further create some texture to the map.

The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map, so good job on that! The beginning of the parkour felt too easy while the end felt to hard, try creating a more consistent difficulty to balance out your parkour. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps ladders and panes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly