Rejected Blossom Town - Hard/Expert

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Username: xCreepyx
Map Name: Blossom Town
Number Of Jumps: 82
Difficulty: Hard/Expert
Warp: /plot visit xCreepyx 2
ID: 81;99
Helper: theBobtheBlob
Checkpoints: 4
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Ok so im giving a -1 for the reasons below

Parkour: Could be better just feels like a bunch of ladders,fences and normal/half slab jumps

Theme: Floating Islands?

Build, ok so the build could be better, it to me is too bland and could use a lot more detail, also i suggest looking at this thread
https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
 

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Hello xCreepyx,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have several tree related maps (FloatingTrees, SpookyTrees, Tree.) I'm going off of your above comment which says tree is the theme. Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is somewhat accurate to what you were going for. However, I do think that it could benefit with some more details, particularly on the outside.
The parkour is also quite repetitive, so make sure that you incorporate different styles of jumps throughout the entire map! The length is good for the expert difficulty, but the parkour is a bit easy in my opinion.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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