Rejected BloodRitual/Blood Magic - Hard/Expert

[Hick_Hock_4]

A Parkour featuring an Evil Demon Cleric performing Forbidden Blood Magic!

Parkour by Hick_Hock_4
Jumps: ca. 80 with 7 Checkpoints
Plot: 96;-87
Difficulty: Hard/Expert

Also 3 hidden Diamond Skulls are hidden accross the Map, can you find Them?
If you find any shortcuts or Parts you can Cheese inform me!
The Parkour is in the right Back of the Plot.

 

[Elly_x]

Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The block choices you choose make the build look very messy. The shaping isn't bad, but with the trap doors being able to be manipulated, the build shaping changes and becomes awkward and weird. Also when looking up the theme, the character is very buff and strong. The build doesn't really resemble that.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a hard map, so good job on that! Your parkour was very confusing and lacked variance. It felt like you were just doing trap door jump after trap door jump and couldn't find the actual path the parkour is on. It did have some nice moments with some creative jumps, but they were very rare.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly