Rejected apple mania

[Zoorpz]

my map is called apple mania. its nothing amazing as its my first map. it is easy level and I think people would enjoy it

 

[uraketu]

like 10 jumps, no checkpoints, repetetive jumps, build isnt so nice, theme for an apple was already made
This will get rejected 100%

 

[Zoorpz]

there is a checkpoint

 

[Luck_voltiaa]

The build is very plain. Not much texture or detail. The apple is small and the parkour is really poorly made. There is only 10 jumps as said above and there is zero block variation in it.

 

[Zoorpz]

please look at my other build super mario 3d

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Zoorpz,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we do not have any maps based off apples.
The build is very plain/flat in its current state. Try to expand the shape and add more details throughout; make it less square.
The parkour is very repetitive throughout, so make sure you use other types of jumps in your map. This may include; water, lava, heads, vines, trapdoors, iron bars, and many other different types of jumps depending on your theme/build. The parkour is also too short; a few more jumps would be okay but still iffy.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!