Rejected Ancient Sky Islands - Medium

[lapislazulilassi]

Username: lapislazulilassi
Map Name: Ancient Sky Islands
Pictures:

Plot: /plot v lapislazulilassi 1
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 48 (2 Checkpoints)

 

[ovur]

Super fun map, the builds a little plain though. The parkour like I said is fun but not varied too much. good luck!

 

[IPattyI]

Hey lapislazulilassi,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have way too many biome-related maps currently on our server, this is a pretty unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. I say this because there's nothing original about it, it's just your run-of-the-mill Minecraft pyramid and some floating islands. You need to try harder and pick out something that is unique, this just isn't gonna cut it.
• Parkour: The parkour was both long and hard enough for the medium difficulty. Although, I recommend that you add more checkpoints as two is not very forgiving for this difficulty. Nevertheless, your parkour did have a bigger problem: variety. You used a lot of the same blocks/jumps for most of your parkour, proving to make it very unenjoyable to do. Don't be afraid to experiment with your parkour, incorporate more jumps to it! Also, you need to label your barriers (especially the ones in the interior portion of the pyramid with the lava) to avoid confusion.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck