Rejected Yummy Pizza - Medium

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It's my first I hope you like it.
It can be changed in to easy too because I couldn't decide.
Built by: tuna_kitis
 

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The build is very good, but unfortunately there are many food maps and even a couple pizza maps. Try to think of a theme that no one has done before.
 

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+0. The build is fine, and the parkour seems fine. But like Tasses already said, the theme isn't orginal, as there are already a lot of food/pizza maps. I wish you good luck though!
 

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Hello tuna_kitis! Unfortunately, your map has been rejected.

The parkour is a bit short/easy for a medium, and it can get very repetitive in some spots (for example, near the end, there's 9 ladder jumps in a row). It also floats above the void in some spots, as opposed to being incorporated into the build, which isn't ideal.

The build is very simple, and although you can easily recognize that the map is pizza-themed, the person eating looks very awkward, especially with how oblong his head is and the way his neck bends straight backwards (and isn't connected to a body), and the pizza lacks detail (although the build is rather small, you could still have included a bit more detail in terms of toppings or color variation).

The theme is not very original; we have many food maps, including two pizza maps (PizzaGuy, Pizza), both of which look somewhat similar to your map.

Thanks for submitting your map, and we hope to see more from you in the future!​
 
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