Rejected Washington Monument - Hard

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  • Username: Geshultz
  • Map name: Washington Monument
  • Theme: Famous Landmarks in United States of America
  • Photos of map/parkour: https://prnt.sc/r3svj7 More pictures: https://prnt.sc/r3svlv more: https://prnt.sc/r3svr7 more: https://prnt.sc/r3sy48 more: https://prnt.sc/r3sybv
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  • Difficulty: Hard
  • 82 jumps on the map total.
  • 4 checkpoints total on the map.
  • Additional information: The map is based off the Washington monument in Washington District of Columbia. I tried to look for pictures of the inside there weren't any good pictures of the entire inside so I made all the parkour on the outside.
  • Credits: Thanks to PyroTortilla for testing out the map's parkour.
 

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The parkour fits the hard difficulty. It has a few floating jumps but they aren't intrusive or ugly. The only part I dislike is this bit because of the cobwebs and this felt repetitive because there are already multiple luck vines on the map. https://prnt.sc/r3ty03

The theme is original as there are no Washington Monument maps.

The build is solid and is recognizable as the Washington Monument. However, the monument itself is more of an obelisk while yours is more of a rectangular prism, but that is alright.

I give this a +1. Good job Gesh
 

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Hello Geshultz,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps relating to any monuments, especially this kind, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what it looks like in real life. However, it does appear plain. I do love the addition of flags near the bottom of the build, though!
The parkour does have some variety throughout; however, the use of vines makes it a bit repetitive. The vine jumps (particularly the ones with cobwebs) were also a bit too difficult for a hard map, so I would suggest removing or altering those jumps. The parkour is also floating quite a bit (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which can make it appear messy. The length was good for the hard difficulty!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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