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Hewwo fellow hoomans i hope you like my stowyyy!!

The Missing Sword
by FluffyMission

once upon a time, from the far....far....so far....definitely far away place called the faction. The 5 hoomans build there base to protect there items an themselves. After building their base the leader suddenly lost his sword named the Slappy Fish and blaiming to his 4 hooman comrades. He called his comrades for a meeting to his lost sword.

Dacon: i call everyone for a meeting.

everyone goes to there meeting place. Anxi responded

Anxi: What are we gonna talk about dacon?

dacon is the leader of the party and help his member to live long enough and keep them safe from any harm but dacon still wanna find his sword.

Dacon: someone here stole my favorite sword

everyone gasp knowing it

Anxi: do you have any clues. who was it?
Dacon answered.
Dacon: No that is why i called all of you to know who stole it.


they give a clueless face to dacon.

sil: but sir everyone is busy today.
dacon responded.
dacon: i know but my my sword is missing in my room. if no one will be honest to say who stole my sword i will go to your rooms and find it no matter what.


everyone responded saying yes.

dacon check anxi's room
Anxi: welcome yo my room dacon.
Anxi rooms is so organized and dacon suddenly got curious because its so clean
dacon: can i check every corner of your room
anxi respond "sure". Dacon didn't left any place to search and confirming that his sword is not in anxi's room.


"Anxi likes to organize everything because she gets bothered alot"

Dacon: thank you anxi for letting me go inside to your room.

And dacon walks away going to sil's room

Dacon: hello sil can i check your room?
sil respond "sure". Dacon did not found it again and left sil's room.


"Sil is the person who is quiet and loves to read books"

Dacon has 2 more rooms need to inspect and trying hard to remember who or where did he put his sword.

That sword is so important for him

Dacon inspect noctqrns room
dacon: are you aware what im gonna do?
noct respond "sure check anywhere you want". And yet again still didn't find his lovely sword and started to get teared .


"noctqrn a straight forward person all of his reasons are valid and with evidences"

and dacon leaves noctqrn room to inspect the last area.

solfoccate's room .
A room that no one can enter and who knows what is inside maybe a dead body, a mystery. Who knows but dacon really wants to find his sword.


Dacon asked Solfoccate if he can enter the room.
solfoccate resond "yes".

Dacon is so nervous what is inside of his room. After opening the door dacon shocked what he sees.


Dacon: HOLY YOUR ROOM IS FULL OF ANIME

"yes solfoccate is a weeb he likes go draw, watch and read any anime related"

Dacon failed find his sword again and lose hope that it was gone.

Dacon: Sorry solfoccate for disturbing you
solfoccate responded "meh"


One whole day dacon failed to find his favorite sword whining in his room. "where is my sword? i need my sword! that is my baby!" and continously whine and whine.

after that day dacon goes to his storage room and fixing him self of what happened to him yesterday. He notice something behind his closet.

dacon: what is that?

Dacon gasp and find his sword

Dacon: YAY ITS MY SWORD WOO I MISSED YOU SOMUCH SLAPPY FISH. I THOUGHT YOU WERE GONE IM FINDING YOU ALL DAY YESTERDAY AND I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU

what he said dacon turns around and everyone was there he got shy and hiding his sword

all 4 lf them giving a judgement look and a despair because dacon blame everyone.

The end
Well some people are like this misplace their things and suddenly blames anyone from his/her sight.

and lets be true its still happening till now

Lesson:

Never lost your stuff because blaming people is bad and it will end up a misunderstanding and cost of fights. Ask them properly so we can avoid any misunderstanding.


 

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if anyone will read my story pls give me notes of what do i need to improve because im still practicing my english grammar and it will help me properly to enhance it.. thank you somuch <3
 

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This is a pretty good story not gonna lie
 

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Part 2?;) Great story though lol❤️
 

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Round of applause from me, to be honest, people are scared to go into my room in real life, it's a mystery of what's inside. (Although I'm pretty sure there's no dead bodies)
 

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oh my gosh. I do love organising... sometimes :p
This story is amazing. I’m flattered to have been thought of for it :3
Would love a part 2!