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I like it but try and keep it on beat for me its just too many words for the slowbeat. Honestly though that's just a personal opinion.
Also loved the hooks when they were in tune!!!
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I like it but try and keep it on beat for me its just too many words for the slowbeat. Honestly though that's just a personal opinion.
Also loved the hooks when they were in tune!!!
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!! Ty!! :D and you're completely right I need to perfect that timing xD
 

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!! Ty!! :D and you're completely right I need to perfect that timing xD
Its just all over the place if you get me? You're voice is amazing but you need flow rhythm and slow it down to the beat and It would sound a lot better imo.
 

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I love your voice! Even when rapping it's very melodious and pleasant to listen to. Like Raptor said, if you're going to do some heavy rapping stuff, make sure you're very careful about staying with the Music. You should consider other genres too! Good luck with whatever you end up doing.
 

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I love your voice! Even when rapping it's very melodious and pleasant to listen to. Like Raptor said, if you're going to do some heavy rapping stuff, make sure you're very careful about staying with the Music. You should consider other genres too! Good luck with whatever you end up doing.
I would love to explore more genres :3 tysm!
 
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I liked the "bug spray" part. Though if you study music and rhythm you should be able to go places with your music if you decide to go full time. I am currently taking music theory and it's really helping me out with making my own music and it also can help you learn to perfect certain things in your music like BPM and time signatures which can ultimately help with timing. I'm not that skilled in the music production, but I've been in a band and have written pieces before for piano I just haven't gotten around to publishing them. This is just a bit of advice, but you don't really need to take it into consideration if you already have your path carved out.
 

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I liked the "bug spray" part. Though if you study music and rhythm you should be able to go places with your music if you decide to go full time. I am currently taking music theory and it's really helping me out with making my own music and it also can help you learn to perfect certain things in your music like BPM and time signatures which can ultimately help with timing. I'm not that skilled in the music production, but I've been in a band and have written pieces before for piano I just haven't gotten around to publishing them. This is just a bit of advice, but you don't really need to take it into consideration if you already have your path carved out.
Thank you very much for the advice :D I am definitely not one to 'study' anything but I'd love to give it a try if it helps my craft xD