Rejected By the Fire (improved)

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User: ShAmPo0o
Map Name: By The Fire
Photos: (below)
Warp: 30;85
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 32
FYI- The plot says that I had a helper, but that was for the parkour that was there not the current one

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Hello ShAmPo0o,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is still original and unique.
The build is accurate and decently attractive, but it is also a bit plain. I would maybe add some decorations to the walls (You could even make part of the parkour based off of the decorations!) and maybe add some more detail to the floor. The fire looks good, and the cats are really adorable.
The parkour is still a bit repetitive. As I said above, you could incorporate the parkour with potential decorations! (Example: Vines, heads, iron bars, etc.) It does fit the easy difficultly quite nicely! One thing about this map is that the build is so big that I think you should utilize as much of it as possible.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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